Tuesday, May 22, 2018

Asking

asking for patience
              hurriedly
blessings
             for a half full cup
guidance not followed
             to follow me
forgiveness
             for what's left undone

For The Tuesday Platform at Real Toads

6 comments:

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Beautiful! Patience is something we should always seek and ask for..💜

gillena cox said...

Nice form. I can read this poem 3 ways. Vertically Horizontally and normal standard left to right.

Much♥️love

Toni Spencer said...

I want patience and I want it now.

Brendan MacOdrum said...

So the spirit makes it way in the world,. And so we forgiveness for our permissions.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I resonate with "forgiveness for what's left undone." Beautiful, Kelli.

Fireblossom said...

I had to read each side in turn to really get the poem. Asking on the run...YOU? ;-)