"curtain sky open wide"...I love that. And we must never stop dreaming!
it's not, is it... ~
That last line - powerful
Oooh girl you sure know how to stun with a closing line!💖 Splendid write.
exquisite - how DO you knock it out of the ball park so often?
Hmm, sometimes I think it is.
Maybe it should be so...
no matter what, keep dreaming.. Excellent poem.
I can certainly relate to this kind of frustration with my body's inability to sleep.
I spend a lot of time with that pulled curtain night sky.
There is a weariness in this poem which resounds perfectly
I love that final piece of wisdom.
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