Oh yes hard to spot those with scissors behind their backs...blind trust no more! Loved your take on this one.
Oh, that is it, they admire the beauty then cant wait to destroy it.
Promis of salvation, only to hide the scissors behind his back. Good one!
Yes, I'll be your savior, but you won't like the cost.
An interesting perspective!
Beware indeed... every savior will charge a tribute.
powerful message in only a few wordsyes the world is full tricksterswho only want to takenamasteJzB
calls a good by grounded manI love how this reads - the layers that are just subtle enough - then, of course, the follow through reveal. Powerful.
Oh no - NOT scissors! Clever poem.
Everyone covets her hair!
Yeah, I'll be he runs with those scissors too.
Never trust anyone with scissors behind their back - but you can't always see them, especially if you're in a high tower.
Uh oh! But that's the way of the world. No blind trust :)
Brilliant take on the prompt! Watch out for those scissors :)
I was almost taken in by that good by grounded man! The ending is priceless.:)
Of course he does!
Ooh...how chilling! I am thrilled by this piece. Great write!
Wonderful, but it's not that we're trying to destroy the beauty, just possess it. It's just that in trying to hold on to the beauty, we accidentally kill it.
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