Tuesday, September 19, 2017

Instrument

strings of stars
from navel to heart
rib weave
chest
octaves of
drum tight skin
egg belly
blood nest

For The Tuesday Platform at Real Toads

10 comments:

Kerry O'Connor said...

What an inspiration you are, MZ.

Timoteo said...

Reminds me of that Neil Diamond song, "Play Me"

Sanaa Rizvi said...

My goodness this is good!!

brudberg said...

Music when it's best.

Sherry Marr said...

This is fabulous. I especially love the strings of stars.

Martin Kloess said...

One's imagination can really have fun with these words.

wkkortas said...

Spare in the best sense; wonderfully tight yet evocative.

said...

This makes me think of decorating a Christmas tree but getting so tangled up (in memories perhaps) that you forget where you are and why you're doing what you're doing. Trying to birth something that turns into a bloody mess.

Brendan MacOdrum said...

Navel gazing from an orchestra's podium: How much is commanded in this precise, articulate view.

Bekkie Sanchez said...

Awesome!