Friday, September 15, 2017

I Am Not Seeing

this
place, lovely as
it may be.  All I see
is the vacancy beside me -
the ghost.

For Sanaa's prompt at Real Toads

7 comments:

Sanaa Rizvi said...

My goodness! This is incredibly potent and worth a countless reads! Thank you so much for participating, Mama Zen💖

Buddah Moskowitz said...

Your economy of words packs a real punch.

Kerry O'Connor said...

That about sums up my life.

angieinspired said...

want a new pair of eyes? nah. your pair is pretty lucid. nice write

Sherry Marr said...

Wow. I know that feeling. That absence so big it is a presence. A fantastic poem, Mama Zen.

Magaly Guerrero said...

Hope the ghosts is smiling...

Sara McNulty said...

So few words convey deep emotion. I love this.