Friday, June 23, 2017

Alto



The dead don't mind
if I sing off key
and seesaw their femurs to rollick along

to the beat
of a heart
bludgeoned and ceased,

but for the beauty
embalmed in my songs.

Bass clef cut -
my hands to start to treble
at all of the insides God's hidden away.
A score finally settled
and spread on my table.
A stillness, a movement,
a sheet to be played.

A little something for the Beautiful Freaks Fest

19 comments:

Holly said...

Your words brought the imagery to the surface of my consciousness .
http://gypsyspiritrising.blogspot.com/2017/06/beautiful-freaks-fest-2017.html

grapeling said...

Barnum and Bailey. fitting to the circus we all now live in. ~

Magaly Guerrero said...

The thought of beauty embalmed in song brewed all sorts of giggles out of me. Deliciously freakish, and then some!

Rene said...

I'm an Alt-o too.

"seesaw their femurs" ... fabulous

Love this:
"to the beat
of a heart
bludgeoned and ceased,
but for the beauty
embalmed in my songs"

Nice:
"A score finally settled
and spread on my table."

Sharon Rawson said...

Wow! Revenge served with a song! Wonderfully dark and deranged! Loved it!

Rene said...

"Bass clef cut (tee hee) -
my hands to start to treble/trouble/tremble"

Gina said...

Wow...Moonlight Dismemberment ..what a magical sound :D XXX

Victoria said...

Gorgeous, dark and beautiful!
Victoria

Kerry O'Connor said...

Aside from the awesome imagery, I love the rhyme.. this one begs to be read aloud.

Living Dead Girl Nicole said...

I was actually going to say what Kerry said!

Rommy said...

What delightfully macabre music these images make.

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Deliciously dark and enticing!!❤️

Liz Rice-Sosne said...

The first two lines just got me. What a great beginning to set up the rest of poem - and also my mood as I read. Thank you. enjoyed it.

Little Gothic Horrors said...

Between the rhythm and the imagery, I was picturing Tim Burton's Land of the Dead from 'Corpse Bride'. Love it! Thank you for participating in BFF!

Magic Love Crow said...

Freaky, cool and brilliant!!!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Wonderful. As Kerry says, one to be read aloud.

The Narrator said...

This has so much imagery and lots of little wicked things running through its core.

Sioux Roslawski said...

MZ--All the word play. Treble...movement... score.

Bravo! Encore!

Fireblossom said...

Reminds me of the song "Dead Are Dancing" by Toni Childs.