Sunday, June 18, 2017

Already Fallen

I've cancelled Spring

in favor of your Winter kiss.
Summer can't compare
to the heat we hold between us.

Autumn won't be needed.

I've already fallen.

For Poetry Pantry at Poets United

17 comments:

grapeling said...

gorgeous! ~

Gillena Cox said...

Magnificent!!!

much love...

Sherry Marr said...

Wowzers! Wonderful!

brudberg said...

Love it... great use of the season in an unexpected way.

Sioux Roslawski said...

What a great love poem. Short and oh-so sweet.

indybev said...

Proof that less IS more. This says it all!

Blogoratti said...

A brilliant read indeed. Greetings!

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Ahhhh! Perfection.

Martin Kloess said...

I was kissed by a lover

Thotpurge said...

Like the wordplay...

R.K. Garon said...

That's the spirit :)
ZQ

Old Egg said...

I always know a good poem when I find myself laughing all the way through. Thank you so much.

Magaly Guerrero said...

It this was any yummier, I would probably have to eat it!

Jae Rose said...

I especially love the end image

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Stunning!!❤️

WildChild47 said...

Superb! Absolutely power packed!

Fireblossom said...

Who did Spring think she was, anyway? It's a very good, very skillfully constructed love poem.