Are we not then at our most beautiful?The double meaning in the final lines is so well played.
Masters of our own minds ... especially when we lie to ourselves for the sake of "mental health" and self worth.
If we're doing it right, I think we're at our ugliest. :P
it is. you are. beautiful. exquisite in what you do.
Oh so clever
Your last line surprised a LOL.
And you are.......believe!
Love it! Perfection! You have the most amazing way of packing so much into a few words.
The use of "came" here is immense, because it captures both moment and history. The former reading is stronger than the latter--also probably more true--but the latter has more gravity. Anyway, yay.
The last two lines--perfect.
Brilliant and the last line is ace! A clever write!Kind regardsAnna :o]
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