I like it, becoming one with the animal's mind.Thank you for commenting on my poem at Dark Hearts Love Too.
My goodness this is good!!
My heart aches for the poor rabbit...
You sly dog, you!
God Dog Twitch Still...marvelous wordplay
Quite a wallop in the first two lines--and how incongruous we always find it when we come smack up against the bloody immutability of our animal selves.
Like a punch in the gut!
So much tension in these lines.. and a very clever play on dog/god.
I can see both dog and rabbit in the "twitch/still". Wonderful!
Tapping in to that bit of hunter in you; Interestingmuch love...
my boys have a new dog and evidently he loves to chase rabbits. he doesn't bark, and if you stop petting him he jaws your wrist until you start again.you sure get to the heart here. ~
You are channeling the animal spirit... love it
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