Tuesday, January 17, 2017

Earth Axis Girl

Earth axis girl
with a spring fever tilt.
Kneel dirty knees
wet with murder and milk.
You're flowering.

A beautiful flowering.

Ekphrasis girl
a paint by the blind
blood buried braille
for fingers to find.
You're sparrowing.

Starling and sparrowing.

You've got sky between your thighs.
You're built of the bones of archetypes
that know it's better to be alive
than wise and dead.
So open up your head

and let wildflowers seed.

For The Tuesday Platform at Real Toads

16 comments:

☾ Iris said...

Damn, MZ. You have an InSaNe gift!
~Hot, hot, hot, sister.

"Earth axis girl
with a spring fever tilt."

"Kneel dirty knees
wet with murder and milk." <--- Absolute fave.

"blood buried braille
for fingers to find"

"You've got sky between your thighs."

Love this.

Sanaa Rizvi said...

This completely blew me away! Kudos ❤️

Magaly Guerrero said...

To be "Starling and sparrowing", what a wondrous sight...

Buddah Moskowitz said...

Loved it all - especially the earthy eroticism, but esp

"So open up your head

and let wildflowers seed." Bril, baby, bril.

Gillena Cox said...

"Ekphrasis girl
a paint by the blind"

I'm thinking your inspiration came from contemplating some work of art,
Intense write, Happy Tuesday

much love...

Kerry O'Connor said...

This has a musicality to the lines which makes it a delight to read. Your unique imagery adds to the fun.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

WOW! I especially love "you're sparrowing." Brilliant writing.

brudberg said...

So much to love here... the contrasts between the gentle and murder, between blood and a sigh... and sparrowing is a word I envy.

Margaret said...

I too kept seeing "images" of an amazing oil painting or something... so graphic in its imagery - stunning and I won't copy my favorite lines as I'd just copy and paste the whole thing!

razzamadazzle said...

This is just crazy amazing!

angieinspired said...

Good night everyone. It is done. Can't be outdone

blueoran said...

An amulet for a Northern winter, muse of Frost's "To Earthward" and warm on Brian and the two other guys on crosses signing "Always Look on the Bright Side of Life." Cue wildflowers! A fine hedge-spell.

kaykuala said...

So open up your head
and let wildflowers seed.

Nothing like being unnecessarily aloof and not wanting to be involved. Opening oneself to other's opinions can be helpful and rewarding!

Hank

grapeling said...

yes ~

Kim Russell said...

Wonderful wordplay and imagery, Mama Zen! Love your Earth Axis Girl!

Fireblossom said...

I love how you use "starling" as if it were a verb. This entire poem is exactly that...real poetry, the way it should be written.