Sunday, November 6, 2016

Renewal

I want to renew myself
like a magazine -
nine ninety nine for a fresh new year
with special offers
(just check here) -
free tote bag
included.

For Poetry Pantry at Poets United

15 comments:

Nebraska J. said...

I love this. :) So original and inventive.

brudberg said...

Love the simile... I think I would the tote bag to be broken though

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Oooh this is bang on brilliant!! :D

Kerry O'Connor said...

I'd like to subscribe myself!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

LOTS of special Offers! May it be so.

Sioux said...

MZ--That would be wonderful if we could do that.

Julian said...

I really like the concept of your poem, most enjoyable

Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger said...

Love this--esp the tote bag--I wish it were that easy!

Truedessa said...

I want to re-new myself as well, for a limited time you can two years at one low price.

Mary said...

We all need renewal!

Brother Ollie said...

nice! You keep your imagery fresh. Well done Mama Zen!

Old Egg said...

I think we can indeed do this(given the chance) several times in our lives until you realize you have finally passed the use by date.

Buddah Moskowitz said...

Clever and I agree.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Grin.

(The free tote bag is a nice touch.)

Fireblossom said...

Then you could pick yourself up and carry yourself away.