Thursday, June 23, 2016

Poorly Animated Girl

Too long, too leggy, too limber, too liquid -
all anarchic angles aching the eyes.
Vaginal vertex obtuse and open -
charcoal smudging the spread of her thighs.
Bobble head blonde

to a doll

with primitive technique.
Nipple fixation -
pink, pink, pink
slick lips. A glimpse
of kitty cat tongue -

purr come baby come baby come baby come

baby lips can't refuse,
fingers can't form a fist.
arms spread presentation
no-ego thrust hips.
Poorly Animated Girl -
make wish
kiss kiss.

For Susie's prompt at Real Toads


brudberg said...

Alas defenselessness is always in fashion... poor thing.

Anonymous said...

poorly animated but well written!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Well, I knew you would rock this prompt - your style and imagery is as powerful as Amber's. I wonder if Wild Woman can make an appearance for this prompt? Hmmmmmm........

Buddah Moskowitz said...

This is so good, but the description is too creepy for me to enjoy -which, I assume, is the point. You're such a talented one. Thanks, Mosk

Susie Clevenger said...

Yes, there is a sick fascination for defenseless. You not only rocked the challenge, but made a profound social statement. Thanks so much for participating!!

Anonymous said...

Its easier to rip the heads off poorly animated dolls once one has finished undressing them. In about the time it takes for the string of come-hither baby talk to wind back in. This reads like Chrissy Hynde channeling the sibyl who didn't get away.

Rommy said...

Sharp, and very fierce. You played with the prompt like a virtuoso and created a damning observation on a societal fetish.

Kerry O'Connor said...

You present an image which seems all too familiar with the way womanhood is depicted these days. This swept me off my feet with its bold and vivid imagery.

angieinspired said...

Barbie would smile through the whole thing. i love the color pink, pink, pink nipple fixation. Does that make me a boob (wo)man? lol I never played with dolls.

De said...

Love this, especially:
"all anarchic angles aching the eyes."

I saw an archangel here, as well.

Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil said...

This poem speaks of the nymph craze. Why men seem to like shaved pubes and Kardashian girls who look like blowup dolls. It's that odd thing in our society, the festishization of puberty... Amy

Fireblossom said...

What Amy said. Plus, got to love your title.