Monday, April 4, 2016

Cloud Kittens

Cloud kittens playing
cotton pawed and tummy tumbling
through the blue sky afternoon
mousing a storm.

Sneak, stalk, jump!
Caught in kitten teeth
 -pop!- like a balloon
goes the sun.

Thunder stomp stomps
stomps in from the west -
splashing through the puddles
till the whole sky's dripping wet

and cloud kittens shake
from their whiskers

grey sky afternoon
mousing storms.

For Margaret's Nature prompt at Real Toads


ava said...

I love this!!! So cute. ;)

Susan said...

Haha ... fast moving things those clouds ... and in pursuit. Purrrfect!

Marian said...

Nice! Exactly right, on little kitten feet. :)

Kerry O'Connor said...

I would love to see this poem illustrated. It is so visual. I love the idea of the clouds mousing up a storm.

Debi Swim said...

What a wonderful, playful image for a storm.

Sanaa Rizvi said...

grey sky afternoon
mousing storms..


Buddah Moskowitz said...

You did nature a right good write!

Fireblossom said...

What made you think of this? I love it.

Gemma Wiseman said...

So love the lively image of cloud kittens mousing up a storm. A playful one.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I love and can picture the rambunctious cloud kitties. Baby Puppy will love this poem!

grapeling said...

love the imagery, MZ ~

Margaret said...

Absolutely captivated by the first stanza and smiled my way through it all! I agree - this should be illustrated!