Thursday, September 10, 2015

Confronting My Muse

Another poem?  Really?

How about something longer

     with witty banter
     a killer clown
     terrorists
     and sex
     car chases
     electric girls
     nudity
     and sex
     explosions
     a car chase
     product placements
     and sex
     annnd . . . a possible sequel?

Come on, what do you think?

Throw me a popcorn movie plot.
These poems are a waste of ink.

For Words Count at Real Toads

17 comments:

brudberg said...

Ha.. I think it's worth a sequel.. there's enough ink to paint it black you know.

Fireblossom said...

Bite your tongue. The world needs more kick-ass poetry, but doesn't need Jaws 6: Fast & Furious Sharknado In The City.

Glenn Buttkus said...

Wow, this only comes in at under 55 words; bravo. I dig your enthusiasm though, both as a movie buff & a poet; loved the prompt, the video was like German Expressionism.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

This made me smile. No one kicks it like you do, kiddo.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

This made me smile. No one kicks it like you do, kiddo.

grapeling said...

oy. ink? what's that? electrons - definitely a waste of those... ~

hedgewitch said...

With too many people, there's no difference anyway. I say stick to the devil you know, and share the pitchfork generously.

Lolamouse said...

Wow. Sounds like a horrible date night!

Hannah said...

I hear you...it's tiresome the mounting amount of garbage there's out there...on so many levels. Thank you, for the challenge, MZ.

Kerry O'Connor said...

You had me at sex explosions...

;-)

Jim said...

A one-night let-loose. Only a bad dream for me though, way too old.
I love to see how you Toads handle your own prompts. Good prompt, you did it all very well.
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Outlawyer said...

You would definitely make more money this route. But it would be a loss for poetry world. k.

X said...

Ha. The way poetry is often treated as a second hand art. And the current box office. Yep that is about right

Susie Clevenger said...

Your poetry is a novel in a few words. Keep writing it. We have enough witless sequels pumped out at the speed of boring.

Gillena Cox said...

i came in expecting dark,i smiled at witty instead

much love...

Susan said...

Bless you, waste it! Hahaha. I bet you'd be great at grinding out those plots, though, so if you have a rebel muse go for it. But just for a minute, or you might drown in the waste.

Sioux said...

That Jaws 6 movie that Shay proposed sounds like a winner. If she (or the two of you) wrote the screenplay, it would be a blockbuster.