Friday, September 25, 2015

Above Ground

last day above ground
each breath
a poem

A jisei for dVerse.

20 comments:

Grace said...

And so it is ~ Lovely jisei MZ ~

Georgia Koch said...

A perfect jisei ... beautiful! Bastet

Kate Mia said...

I for
one Die
twice
in Life
and
literAlly
AM born
again as A
Dance of PoeTry..
Life IS magic when
one comes aGAiN
fulLY aLiVe.. in LiVinG
Waters Ocean BReaTh..:)

Toni Spencer said...

This takes my breath - in a good way. So profoundly beautiful and true. The best of all of these. Spencer is Kanzensakura

brudberg said...

That is how it should be those last breaths.. couldn't say it better.

Sylvia K said...

Perfect it is indeed, MZ!!

Bodhirose said...

I hope I have the ability to write a poem with my last breaths. I really like this, MZ!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

As always - a few words, absolutely perfect ones. The best jisei I've read!!!!!! Wowzers, kiddo!

rhymeswithbug said...

Perfect!

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Oh, that says it!

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Oh, that says it!

thotpurge said...

Lovely...

Marina Sofia said...

Perfect - everything I would wish for!

Kathy Reed said...

I love that sentiment...although I don't plan to be underground but out to

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Fireblossom said...

Going down the mine, are you MZ?

Mary said...

So true!

Bryan Ens said...

each breath is a poem...what a wonderful thought.

Enigma said...

Your poems always leave me speechless. My comments would seem so monotonous because they all convey the same thing - that I loved what I read.

Buddah Moskowitz said...

Jisei? Another form to emphasize my ignorance? Yes, but another form for you to master. Love, Mosk