Friday, August 28, 2015

Go

Pixie stick
hips
in a cotton candy
t-shirt
and sugar center
mini skirt -
go home.

Pop rocks
in soda pop
sweet tooth
brain rot
jailbait
lollipop -
go home.

Playing with modifiers for Meeting the Bar at dVerse

16 comments:

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Cool wordplay in this one. I can see her, in her cotton candy t-shirt.

Sylvia K said...

I always love your wonderful wordplay!! Have a great weekend!!

Claudia said...

very cool wordplay... and i just LOVE the cotton candy shirt...ha... lecker
smiles

De said...

Groovy mandate, girl. Well spilled, and fun to dance aloud.

whenspaceissilence said...

Sugar center mini skirt is clever. It can be understood in a sweet innocent way, but it can also hint at something less innocent. I like the duality.

Kate Mia said...

Ah.. a world of eye candy
is harmless unless
one becomes
a diabetic..
sometimes a burka can
be more alluring..
after all eyes
are windows
to the
soul
and
below..
and frustration
of not seeing more
can lead to attempts
at World War III.. perspective
is most
alluring
to me..
in that case
the mini
skirt may
JUST save
the
world..
but i for
one LOVE
EyES THE MOST..:)

Victoria said...

Fun one, Kelly. Long gone, I suspect.

brudberg said...

Like a polka dot bikini almost.. the playfulness here is wonderful

Sabio Lantz said...

Brilliant !
Such a fun chastizement
so playful, cruel, real and funny

Susan said...

Play with a serious warning wrapped in doubles. Perhaps she'll hear and listen.

kaykuala said...

Great word-play MZ! More effective this way when they accompany one another

Hank

Sioux said...

This was pure fluff and pure fun.

Gail said...

This is delightful!

Mary said...

I enjoyed your short and sweet approach! Smiles.

Kerry O'Connor said...

This could describe the 20-something pop stars of the day. I do not know what has happened to feminism.

Fireblossom said...

I just can't stand herrrrrrrr