You're so good. You kill it every single time you write. How do you do that?!
Ah, you are so good indeed!! Never fail to amaze me!!
Sharp, clever, spot on. Nice!
Ditto to what nacho libro said! You are amazing.
You never waste a word and you go places that aren't easy to travel. I find this one disturbing, human, and sad both for the speaker and the caller. How you got this dark gem out of that picture, I don't know, but that is your considerable talent.
Infected my his voice you remain helpless...dark and witty
Dark and well said
Wonderful play on resolution and resolution. Same old same old and yet we want it to be different. Very well done(as always,). K.
Don't pick up the phone!I enjoyed this one.
This picture has given rise to some amazing responses. This was unexpected and oh so very on point.
Too, too often we fall into the trap. Nice.
Oh that growth... I think you better leave him hanging on the line.
Ugh. Cancer kills, but sometimes the treatments do too.
What I love about you is you never hesitate to go to the dark places in the human psyche, the places where we get caught - and you do it so succinctly, yet universally. Wowzers, kiddo! You are amazing.
Def somewhat disturbing. But once you caught it, its pretty invasive - and not easy to get rid of. Even if you try to kill it.
Your poems are sometimes so disturbing, it makes me glad they're so brief.You are one uber-gifted poet.
Learning not to be cornered into such situations can be fun!Hank
And he lives in a phone !
Ooh, this one touches too close to home! How difficult it can be to not answer that call!
The back and forth, so familiar. Nice use of words
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