Wednesday, May 20, 2015

Just Like I Remember

your rain
wet
kiss

just like I remember

your here
& there
hands

I couldn't forget

2
a.
m.

I surrender

yes

god, yes

For Insta-Poetics at dVerse

18 comments:

bwfiction said...

a poem every man wishes he had inspired - very sensual

X said...

Nice, tight, intimate write. I feel I might surrender as well.

Buddah Moskowitz said...

Whew! I need a cigarette. Great job.

Mary said...

What a pleasant memory! Yes, yes!

Gabriella said...

I like that you captured so much in so few words! Very effective.

brudberg said...

That is exactly how 2am should be....
yes
yes

Kate Mia said...

Yes.. lovers gone past.. in times come present..
always a delight when love..
does come
again..:)

Anthony Desmond said...

Hand me a lighter? ha... very intimate.

Fireblossom said...

Sexay, girl. Mmmhmm.

Kathy Reed said...

..let me try to remember..oh, yes, it was like that, yes

S.igh said...

I gather that it's meant to be sexual, but since you ended with "god, yes," it actually makes me think of the story from 1 Samuel 3.

Gail said...

This earned at least an R-rating in my mind!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Love. This.

Sumana Roy said...

sensual & passionate :)

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Wow, such passionate longing!

Kerry O'Connor said...

Here's a poem to get the heart racing.

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Lovely write, very sensual. There is something about 2am...
Anna :o]

grapeling said...

what bw said ~