Saturday, April 11, 2015

Still Life

It's still
life outside my window.
straining toward something.
Degrees turning.
Time burning.
is still.

How I hold on to hope.  For Sherry's prompt at Real Toads.


Sherry Blue Sky said...

YES! PERFECT! You always can say it true, so succinctly. It IS still life - thus, hope. Bang on, Mama Zen. Thanks for writing to the prompt. You nailed it.

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Agreed with Sherry :D
This is so cool!
Loved it :D

Jim said...

Yes, M Zee, perfect. And yes there is still life out that window.
Did you want some fun word play? I found a little, take your choice or both, can't have neither.

Still life, still, as in a 'still snapshot'.
Still life, life, like in 'life goes on.'

Debi Swim said...

Your few words are perfect.

Kerry O'Connor said...

Excellent play on 'still life' - there is still life but for how much longer, it's hard to estimate.

Sylvia K said...

You can and do say it perfectly with so few words and you never fail to amaze me! Hope your weekend is going well, MZ!

Susan said...

straining toward something."
Still, thank God!
Thank you for making this succinct!

Hannah said...

I love the way you played with "still life" poignant and powerful!

Anonymous said...

The title coils the sentiment, turning both ways at once. Yes.

Susie Clevenger said...

Yes, you sum it up perfectly.

Sioux said...

I love the "still life" at the beginning and the "still. Life." at the end.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Yes — and we are part of it.

Outlawyer said...

Hey MZ--the degrees turning and time burning are a little scary! But here we are. Thanks much. k.

Fireblossom said...

Clever, what you did there, Miss Smartypants. ;-)

Marion Lawless said...

Toward LIFE! 👻😘😍❤️❤️❤️ xo

Ella said...

Cheers, to nothing is still~

grapeling said...

perfect ~