Yep, that's me!! How did you know!!
I'd call that one a senryu — a humorous haiku variation, involving human beings rater than nature. And a very good one it is!
Such a cute haiku.. :D I adore it! Wishing you happy haiku day :DLots of lovexoxo
Love this..the perils of star gazing
Did you write about me?? Nice.
haikai humour, however watch out for that toemuch love...
You have employed the 'kiru' technique to perfection in the final line and brought us all back to earth.
I loved that I could see those stars in cartoon...thank you for offering your poem, Mz!!
Ha. A lot of fun. k.
Pretty and funny, MomZee. Until the last two words I though your writer was laid out, DEAD...
I have done this many a time. I've also stepped on many piles of poop in the pasture by not looking where I am going... :)
Ha.. hilarious, and humor is so essential in haiku
Cackling maniacally. (I tried to write a haiku about my chickens this morning, but I just couldn't get there from here.) This has a wonderful quality of explaining everything.
Poor stones always take the heat :D Happy NaPoWriMo Day 17 lol
I like the humor in this
Not fair to get a stubbed toe from star-gazing. Loved this, MZ.
This haiku has a stunning immediacy. Better wath my footing!
You just needed one more syllable to get 'oh shit' in there, lol.
You nailed it~ Oh, that was bad of me...
smiles - the double entendre of title and toe ~
And look! A rabbit!
Your poetic sense of humor is the kind of delight I won't ever get tired of. :-D
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