Thursday, November 6, 2014

Charming Man

Such a charming man
singing, swaying with his sword
lily in his hand.

Lily in his hand -
sharp enough to pierce a heart -
doesn't give a damn.

Doesn't give a damn.
He's a jumped up pantry boy.
Never knew his place.


7 comments:

Sylvia K said...

Love it! As always!! Have a fun weekend!!

Brian Miller said...

well he changed quite a bit in 3 short verses...from charming to a jumped up pantry boy....nice chaining between the verses...

Buddah Moskowitz said...

Loved it and I was thinking The Smiths when I read the title. Too cool, Mamita Z.

Lorraine Renaud said...

I love it, love your words, love his voice, wow I've missed you...why do I lways seem to lose you when I never delete you. I'll catch up in time ...promise

Mary said...

You've captured him! Nice.

Fireblossom said...

You know so much about these things!

grapeling said...

i still don't know mine ~