Wednesday, October 1, 2014

Upon October

Once upon October
(she lets me be on top),
I lean into her full moon lips
and lose September in her kiss.

For Words Count at Real Toads

25 comments:

Sylvia K said...

I LOVE it!! You are so good, MZ!!

C.C. said...

Brilliantly sensual....love it.

Kerry O'Connor said...

Perfect!

Margaret said...

wickedly clever!

georgeplaceblog said...

wickedly sensual... October, I mean ; )

hedgewitch said...

Short and *very* sweet--and just a little fiery, as well.

Susan said...

Sexy Word-play! One thing leads to and often consumes the next.

Helen said...

Heart's on fire ....

Other Mary said...

Gorgeous - luscious!

Magaly Guerrero said...

Oh my goodness! I'm pretty sure we're feeding from the same October vibes. Yep, October is the sexiest month. ♥

Fireblossom said...

I love it! (and those opening two lines are priceless)

kaykuala said...

One easily forgets when it comes to the crunch! Nicely MZ!

Hank

manicddaily said...

Ah charming. It is funny, we all seem to make her a she. k.

Marion said...

Sigh... Sigh... Sigh... xo

Stacy Lynn Mar said...

oh my! the moon lips...i love it all...so short and compelling and perfect!!

Katy Magee said...

Well, that left me with a wicked giggle. Thanks!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Brilliantly done!

Hannah said...

Alluringly beautiful, Mama Zen!

gabrielle said...

This sizzles!

Gail said...

Wonderful!!!

Susie Clevenger said...

You are the queen of word count...love it

Patricia A. McGoldrick said...

Captivating!

Anjum Wasim Dar said...

Hot

Marian said...

yummy

grapeling said...

whew! ~