great echo in those last 3 lines....nice little intimate momentshared there in the staira simple moment,but those are usually the best.
In a word, delightful...
Vaguely familiar long ago days when two huddled couldn't imagine breathing air--just kisses and smoke.
I love the echo of the memory.
Yes . . . . we all want it back!!lovely writing ~ Eddie :)Clouds and Silvery Linings
Love the repetition in the close.
Oh yes, I remember!
Whatever blows your hair back EmZee
Ah, yes, of course...
Love how this one tumbles...
Nostalgic - but for the cigarette...I never could stand smoke in my eyes... :-)
Yes I remember when....LOVE this!
How do you do it? That's great!
ah. perfect ~
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