Ah, I do like this one, MZ!! Of course, I always like yours!! Enjoy your weekend!!
Excellent! Your brevity here makes the vignette idea pop! There is just enough story to attach emotion to, before the fade away.
Your verse always packs such a punch, you're such an inspiration. Love that last stanza.
O! Thank you for "... goodbyeon both sides of the door.'I wish I had written this! I'm posting it, keeping it.
Oh my goodness - I, too, never would have realized that until I read these words. Profound lines!
Queen of brevity and cudgels...lol. Yeah that was tasty and tiny, just the way I like it. Great job.
This is you doing what you do better than anyone. I think this is excellent.
...also, hello. Beautiful. xo
Wise woman ... such a wise woman.
I'm with Edwin Starr."Good God y'all."(It's better than "Damn.")
Wow! Just... Wow!
Realization and the resulting empathy are profoundly felt in this brief, powerful piece.
oh yes, there certainly is a good-bye in both directions. very nice snapshot, MZ.
Yes, of course, both sides...
Oh, yes there is...Again, a wealth of meaning in a few well chosen words
i guess sometimes love is stronger in saying goodbye...very clever Mama Zen
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