Strangle on silence is rugged...love that!! Awesome work MZ!
WOW!!!!!! "a rotwood of words" and "strangle on silence". Fantastic!
Yes, I also love that 'rotwood of words'!
Oh, yes! "rotwood of words" and "strangle on silence"! Perfect!! You are good, MZ!!
Love this with both the curse and the cure!
Oooh, MZ, succinctly scary. Great lines.K
Great ending - quite unexpected.
Fabulous. The opening, "I coven and compound," and " the sweet sip is yours" are killer.
I knew Mom Zee would come up with a good curse. I loved it, just wish it would have kept me reading longer. ..
It's scary how good you are at this! Which end should we hope for?
This is clever in contradiction and gorgeous in it's pacing and imagery....thanks as always for adding a shiny stone to the poem bucket today MZ!!!
This is deftly written and creepyyy.
It's not surprising how much of the old school witchery transpires between hearts. Nor is it surprising that the other is silent through this, not even a witness. But the craft of this is. The distance between two ends of a single sentence a wild black forest. And all of it whispered into a mirror.
Takes me back to those wonderfully scary fairy tales days. Shivers of delicious dread.
the rotwood of words and the strangling on silence love those lines.
Right now, right at this moment, I don't know what I'd chose, such is your power MZ
oooooooh, this is truly creepy ~ and sooooooo good.
I've changed my mind, secrets or silence, I'll that the silent forever curse
A curse and a cure...I guess the outcome is all about choice. :)
"Strangle on silence"---such an evocative description.
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