Monday, April 7, 2014

Her Scars

When kick
me
sign girl
goes feral,
I

will feed her stars.

When kick
me
sign girl
goes feral,
I

will lick her scars.

Lick
her scars.
Lick
her scars.
Lick
her scars.

For Open Link Monday at Real Toads

18 comments:

Susan said...

Do you have a girl like this who needs feeding and healing? Lick those scars forever ...

Buddah Moskowitz said...

I love these little peeks into the beautiful, mad world inside you.

Fireblossom said...

You've been experimenting lately. I really like this one, especially the way you laid it out on the "page".

Sioux said...

I too loved the lay-out. There is something powerful about the number 3...

Gail said...

Feral with scars...I know a few.

Well done.

Susie Clevenger said...

Sounds like a mother cat and her kitten...we get that way someone we loves needs healing.

blueoran said...

I see the experimenting here, trying to get to the insides of the insides of a feeling, or troping the manner of approach that is more knife- or fang-like: striking the heart faster. You might be paring too much, or haven't figured out what this pay dirt might be, or simply need to leave us mid-motion. Interested to read more.

Ella said...

You make me want to sing and lick some stars~

Grandmother (Mary) said...

This primal, physical care is the kind of love we all need.

Kerry O'Connor said...

This is like picket fence poetry - poet running with stick.

Anonymous said...

You are a star * Mama Zen


having a bitchin' time with laptop today

Lorraine

Lorraine Renaud said...

let's give it another try

razzamadazzle said...

Interesting. Love the use of repetition.

Lorraine Renaud said...

well, hell's Bells

Kathryn said...

I don't know why I love this so much but I do. Taunting and hard hitting.

Fireblossom said...

Yep, like Kathryn, I love this one. It's one of yours that's going to stay in my head.

Margaret said...

…always intriguing (but I am a bit lost with this one).

grapeling said...

very lyrical ~