So beautiful - I could picture the scene, hear the song and feel the emotion.
The original images are terrific. Grey dreams, leaden wings. Excellent.Steve K.
Sounds like night bird's trying but not quite succeeding in bringing sleep.
I love it and you never cease to amaze me!! Oh, and I'll pick up your latest book tomorrow!!
Oh those leaden wings.
carrying anything on leaden wings is a struggle...
Atmospheric, dark, dreamy...love it!
How'd you get so many shades of gray into such a short poem? I want to believe if I found the right thesaurus, I could write like this, but who am I kidding?
The minor key and the "greys away" are striking. The lead. Was this a "grey" prompt? If so, you nailed it, ha ha, that's another grey! Good for you, Mama... Amy
Haunting, like every good lullaby.Hush a bye, baby. <3
Lovely melody to this!
This melancholy warbler as the tincturer of moods. Turning blues to grey.
Gives strong impression of a smooth music encore! Nicely MZ!Hank
Often that is a very good thing Mama Zen
Really beautiful--you create such a wonderful mood here
That nightbird is not your friend.
greys your dreams… that can't be a good thing. I think that is a lullaby you need not hear!
her less eloquent cousin visits here, too
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