Tuesday, February 4, 2014

Dreaming Down

dreaming down
dreaming down
past all praying

dreaming down
dreaming down
where are the words

dreaming down
dreaming down
well west of waking

still haven't heard

For Open Link Night at dVerse

21 comments:

Lorraine Renaud said...

excellent...Dreaming Down, is there anything else? I love your damn poetry ;)

Mary said...

Sometimes the words ARE elusive...and it is a long time before one hears.

Kathryn said...

dreaming down, love that. Those words can be so elusive.

Fireblossom said...

"well west of waking". That's a cool line.

grapeling said...

another song, MZ ~

Claudia said...

hey you're singing for us today... i like...

awakenedwords said...

a lot of dreaming while waiting for the words...

Björn said...

A dreaming like that.. like that

annotating60 said...

You can go down pretty far sometimes before you hear anything. >KB

Brian Miller said...

some fun allit in this gives is a very lyrical tone mz...maybe they will come...smiles.

Ronald Shields said...

we dream and dream to hear the words and suddenly they are there...sometimes. I like the song-like quality of this poem...makes me read it over and over.

Susan said...

If there is a code here, I missed it. Instead I found myself waiting for, working for sleep to come, deeper and deeper, holding off the sunrise in the East. This could be my lullaby.

Dawn Paoletta said...

SOmetimes words play and sometimes they are elusive...dream on Mama Z!

ayala said...

Cool poem !

kaykuala said...

Dreaming down and all the while anticipating. Nicely MZ!

Hank

Bodhirose said...

Words don't usually show up for me while dreaming...just before dreaming...sometimes. And then I'm too sleepy to get up and write anything down. I'm a mess...

aspiritofsimplicity said...

I like the song-like quality to this

miskmask said...

Feels like an incantation. Love it.

Lorna Cahall said...

Really enjoy reading poetry with a good beat. So nice and kinda slow dancing.

Kate Mia said...

i like think of this as twilight..that intermediary space between dreams and reality..
Instead of Sunset that lingers..
slowly in to dark or star...
or moon..of abode...

Pealogic said...

The three last lines of the verse make a great haiku, what do you think?