This is brilliant, MZ! Bringing this imagery together as one...brilliant!
I love this. I can see it.
you always excel at short poetry, MZ ~ love the ways this flows when read out loud, too.♥
Love this one! Bravo MZ
Oh, yes! I love this one, too!!
All five lines--simple and warm and perfect.
There are moments for quiet introspection such as these, when one feels in tune with nature, and poetry seems a part of a much greater whole.
I don't need to tell how much i love this, let me count the ways
So charming. k. (Manicddaily)
How to sit at in a garden reading... i can feel that tree...
aw! a snapshot many of us can relate to :)
great really loved this poem :-)
... 'bark and spine against my spine' ... I think everyone reading this tanka will relate. :)
You have painted a very vivid and poetic scene, Mama Zen and Elizabeth Browning's line at the end blends in perfectly well.
Well captured, MZ!!
How do I love thee, MZ? Can't count that high. LOved this.
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