ah, silence and quiet can indeed be different things...
Yes, there's a big difference between silence and that kind of quiet.
Oh, yes!! I love it and couldn't agree more!!
Ah lovely. k.
Short but oh so sweet. (Spent lovers... I wonder how much I've spent on lovers over the years. Would be nice to have that money back now...especially for those dinner dates that ended at the front door!)
sweet write... there is indeed a difference and you captured it nicely...
silence is never really silent... quieter, yes, but devoid of sound, not usually.
Art of the contrast--perfectly drawn.
Short and sweet...That's one of the things you're oh-so good at.
So wonderful!!!! the "disheveled quiet of spent lovers and gentled hearts"......
Me too, MZ. Me too.
as ever, you capture in few strokes, Mama Zen
Short and sweet ~ Love it MZ ~
WHen you put it that way, who could argue?
Really like this one, MZ. Like the 'disheveled quiet' description -- so very apt!
"gentled hearts" — so beautiful. I love it.K
nope not me I'll take silence over everything except for ocean waves crashing on the beach or the sweet song of an early morning bird, or Satie's Gymnopedie No 1
Great words...spent lovers with disheveled have their own kinds of silence. I like silence...although not the cold kind between people
"Spent lovers...." I am really, truly falling in love with your style of poetry... Those two words create an imagery so vast it is impossible to define. Yet you do it again, and again, and again... Is there anything more serene and quiet than that moment? You are definitely on my favorites list, Keeper of Geckos...
Gorgeous language "spent lovers" "disheveled quiet"--very different types of silence. Thank you.
I loved this MZ--especially the last line--it feels peaceful
22 words and not a bum in the lot. Perfectly expressed.
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