Scrumptious poem. You are so powerful and decisive about your actions! Love it.
You have approach the theme of summer's end from such a unique angle, and the allusion to the bonfire creates a very powerful suggestion in the reader's mind.
im amazed on reading this open links poem, they all are so unique and dfferent and completely awesome.
I took the breathand look back at sunset, colors, bonfires, fire next time.I'll go in and change the clocks (is that a USA thing?) I want to embroider this poem and frame it for my winter wall.
Excellent:"Part path for the pendulum to swing the darkness higher. Level with the sun and equal in desire"
Perfect expression of summer's end.
Oh! This is wonderful. You showed me Autumn through a brand new lens. Thank you.
chanted it aloud 3 times, MZ. rolls smooth off the tongue.
Wonderful poem- really has a pendulum moving here - very creative, MZ (as always)! k.
Oh, bravo - love this angle, this perception!
What a perfect way to write of summer's end.
Intriguing. Loved it.
Perfect. Wonderful use of the autumnal pyre.K
Not a word extra, and every line filled with energy and pictures. Very fine.
'Summer's fed to Fire' oh that one in a million...wow
"Summer's fed to the fire." INspired.
I absolutely love this! Fall and it's long nights have truly arrived.
I must confess - I am so ready to dead-head the flowers :) but not to rake the leaves. I have to get all the dog poop picked up before they really start falling! ;)
This is just so snappy and cool.
I love this!
What I loved most was your alliteration, Mama, as well as your "to hell with summer, let's get it over with" attitude. I can most definitely relate!! Amy
Summer's fed to fire is such a gorgeous allusion to fall's colors.
So rich and unique . . . that's what I love about you and your poems.
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