Oh, I love your sense of humor; and, ha, isn't THAT the truth!
This has a surgical precision that seems almost effortless,working the knife in in your usual casual but deadly fashion, full of your trademark quality of saying all that there is to be said on a subject, ever. Perfect execution of the form, and scathingly realistic on the topic. Thanks for playing, MZ.
Telling a fib is often the kindest thing one can do...
why a big lie, when a small one will do
:) loved the ending line.
Priceless!! I'll keep this handy as a reminder!!!
Thank you, Daphne!
Faking out the form! Cool. Some would try to slide in that extra beat without attracting notice.
another koan by MZ
So clever—the lie is in the fib! Loved this!
I love your wit! Very true and so well done ;D
a good one. :)
Oh-oh .. falling on the floor, laughing out loud. Only you!
Fantastic! "when there aren't enough syllables for a bigger lie" is so YOU, and so wonderful.K
wonderful, perfect.. what else can i say? - wish i'd been smart enough to have thought of this. ;)love "when...there aren't enoughsyllables for a bigger lie."
I like this fib MZ ~
Succinct and to the point! :)
A fibonacci about a fib, in abbreviated verbiage. No one condenses truth like Mama Zen! Love it!
Ha! As always super clever, mordant! Clipped. Very well done, MZ. k.
Very cool, very clever..fibbin' on a Fib - just do the math! Good to be reading you again.
I'm so glad you posted on my poem because I was looking for this one again and couldn't find it. I read it earlier but didn't have time to comment at the time.This is so clever. A fib for a fib. I love it.
You can certainly strike the the truth hard with such few words...love it!
You gotta do what you gotta do
Very apt and funny definition!
A fun play on fib!
Clever and cute!
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