damn fine lyrics - wish I had that talent, MZ. great final stanza.
strong piece mz.agree, the last bit packs the punch in this....
I'd rather burn.
I too might rather burn if I were younger. Romance, too, is like playing with matches. Clear crisp poem, grey and smooth and sane.
Strong words...gray and sane as stone..Nice!
harsh, true I burned out so badly I never could see anyone this this is me
Yesterday was a long day ~~ Gemini/Scorpio/Capricorn got me through the first few (in the end there were five) hours of waiting while my son had six posts implanted into his jaws for the replacement teeth that come when healing has completed.THANK YOU
This is also a koan. I love how you used my poetry form (The Soupy Sales: 25 Words or Less) for this excursion. I's honored. Seriously, your writing is masterful minimalism. YOu give credence to the aphorism: the best writers are even better editors.
I didn't mean to write koan, but your work has a zen-like simplicity that is powerful.
i love this. oh yes i do.
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