Concise and real ... I believe everyone will see your Crow Boy.
Like it or not we're governed by the heart. Rightly said MZ!Hank
It always surprises me, even after reading your work for years, how well you can take a single thought and sharpen it to a needle point that cuts through everything. Every word here is worth ten.
Surreal and so real.
crow for deathred feathers for magicas contrastingas the head and the heart
Six short lines.Six lines that say volumes...
Lordy. Asking MZ to try writing short is like asking Janis to take a crack at the blues.
Ah, the heart is always right! :)
love this from the title to the line break at the end, MZ!♥
snip, to the point and follow the sign.
Wow... love the ending, MZ!
Intrigued, awed by the love, awed by you Mama Zen
The narrator's heart insists! And, I suppose, that is where imagination enters? I have read this poem several times, drawn to it and suspended in the space before nothing. I will not let it end either.
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