great and worrysome.
This is freaking awesome, girl. I love your fiesty poems the best.My favorites are the slammin' opening:"She's markedas his"This:"Her dog collarnoose necklacedisplayed"And the whole second stanza. So yeah, all of it. ;)Man, you amaze me. Your short, quick stabs dig in deep every time.
yikes...this has some grit to it mz....first the least but also what happens should she slip that noose...
Dark and chilling and totally captivating.
Bril - creepy bril - but bril nonetheless.Pearl piss has great multiple meanings. He's an alpha male gone mad. Sometimes those diamonds and pearls are more costly than first imagined.I hate how much I covet your talent.Mosk d N-V-S
This may be gold-gilt, but it isn't sugar-coated. And, while the meaning is dark, the wording is beautiful.
Gritty and truthful --makes me think a bit again --
To remake her engraved gives me chills!
The ending sounds like a nightmare, not an empty threat at all ~
I wasn't quite expecting this when I first read diamond... this one bites. LOL
scary to think what happens when she slips the noose!! nice capture
You write horror beautifully, more disturbing is that it's true...in both reality and fiction, gave me shivers
this one grabs you! knowing you, she will slip the noose and you will write that with the same wicked twist!
Oooh, chilling and very awesome!!
OH! he can too, I mean, I have suspected they do. Stepford wives.
It's a steep price to pay. This is scary great.
Chilling and captivating!
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