mmmm, such witchery!
... no better reason!
Last line says it all, twice.
And you're not burning incense! Double intensity.
Last line says it all.
A very cool poem.
Love it,,,as some others have said, your last line say it all.
I have a feeling he arrives on time :)
Wow. Once again you pack a punch in a few perfectly chosen words!
Mama, love the line, "I burn to bring you," almost as though you're skipping the incense and burning from within, burning with that desire. Sensual and mmmmmmm! Amy
I agree with what Amy said about "I burn to bring you"! As always, when I get behind in my commenting, someone has already said what I wanted to say.A beautiful write, MZ.K
I get this. Oh yes I do.
I agree with Fireblossom...such witchery! And yes I get it. Oh yes I do!;)
smiles...hey whatever it takes eh? very cool short mz...
Would that such invocations were foolproof.
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