Monday, April 22, 2013

Reasons To Burn

Some girls burn incense
to bring good luck or money.
I burn to bring you.

For Open Link Monday at Real Toads

17 comments:

Fireblossom said...

mmmm, such witchery!

Helen said...

... no better reason!

McGuffy Ann said...

Intense!

hedgewitch said...

Last line says it all, twice.

Laura said...

love this!

Susan said...

And you're not burning incense! Double intensity.

ayala said...

Last line says it all.

Gail said...

A very cool poem.

Ellecee said...

Love it,,,as some others have said, your last line say it all.

Margaret said...

I have a feeling he arrives on time :)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Wow. Once again you pack a punch in a few perfectly chosen words!

Sharp Little Pencil said...

Mama, love the line, "I burn to bring you," almost as though you're skipping the incense and burning from within, burning with that desire. Sensual and mmmmmmm! Amy

Kay L. Davies said...

I agree with what Amy said about "I burn to bring you"! As always, when I get behind in my commenting, someone has already said what I wanted to say.
A beautiful write, MZ.
K

Lydia said...

I get this. Oh yes I do.

Adura Ojo said...

I agree with Fireblossom...such witchery! And yes I get it. Oh yes I do!;)

Brian Miller said...

smiles...hey whatever it takes eh? very cool short mz...

Kerry O'Connor said...

Would that such invocations were foolproof.