Sunday, December 30, 2012

Nevermind

A zen koan
melting,
Rumi-d,
and gone goddess.
A riddle
and a promise
held in secret self
divine.

A blank spot
for knowledge
between instinct
and insight.
Illumination -
attainment
of Nirvana
is mine.

Playing around with Shawna's #16 Word List.
Submitted to Poetry Pantry.

16 comments:

Mary said...

Attainment of Nirvana would be pure heaven.

Happy New Year to you, MZ; and thank you for participating in Poets United Poetry Pantry this year. May you continue to be inspired in the new year!

Claudia said...

A zen koan
melting,
Rumi-d...ha...what a delicious word weave...happy new year to you as well mz

jasmine calyx said...

Excellent. You got me all excited; you haven't written for me in ages. This makes me very happy. I just posted a new list ... in actual normal-post form.

"gone goddess" is my favorite, and then "a riddle and a promise held in secret self" ... You are so awesome.

Fireblossom said...

I see Nirvana...but...

where's Nicktoons?!?

thecheesewolf said...

blank spots come round so rarely, and yes they are knowledge when they do. Very much enjoyed these words.

Brian Miller said...

rumi-d....cool twist to make that a verb...those first four lines or so, tight...my fav part...

Heaven said...

How clever to weave the words MZ ~

Happy New Year ~

Manicddaily said...

Rumors of Rumi'd.

Nevermind is a great title for this. Very clever (as always.) k.

Judy Roney said...

Such a cool poem. Reaching nirvana would be wonderful but also that spot between instinct and insight would be nice to travel.

Kerry O'Connor said...

So many avenues towards peace! I love to follow your thought patterns; you have such a unique approach to expression of self-hood.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

I suspect I wouldn't know what to do with Nirvana if I found it. That's a flaw in me, not Nirvana.

my heart's love songs said...

ooooh, i love this, MZ!

"A blank spot
for knowledge
between instinct
and insight."

wonderful!!!

happy happy new year, Kelli!

hedgewitch said...

An excellent example of what you do best here, Mz, but with a bit more shading and subtlety, a slowdance with a sharp blade that is sheathed in a deep intellectual and emotional dilemma, and tooled with the engravings of every rune of the heart, but never disguised.

Laura said...

"A riddle
and a promise
held in secret self
divine." love this... Happy New Year...may it be filled with blessing!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Your first four lines are so good, they leave me speechless. Just so good.

SaraV said...

Excellent playing :-) Rumi-d, Nirvana indeed. Love this!