I confess I've texted before to avoid talking to someone else before...Ingenious poem, as always!
Sounds like a lonely person regardless of how she's seen by others. Nice capture.
def sad...i have texted myself before, but its usually a verse or thought...smiles..tight little verse...
Yep, been there, done that!
But, MZ...you *are* important. You're my Favorite.
Awww, so sad. So even gorgeous, amazing, intelligent, funny and talented beautiful people get lonely?
Sad but beautifully written sadness.
Profound really. I think many can identify......
A universal truth.
Confession time .... I've faked a cell phone call or two or three in my life. Your poem is short, sweet!!!
Haha! This is the true story of many. I love the tongue-in-cheek commentary.
Whew, your first line is harsh ... as if you are a sniper killing yourself.
Wow, loneliness in a nutshell. This stung a bit.
When alone I would clear the baggage of messages. I would also update the address book. Good thinking MZ!Hank
Short and not sweet, but none the worse for that. We took ourselves out to vote and felt the Loneliness of the Long Distanced Democrat.
Text me I will do my best to make you look important...lol. A very lonely but pertinent piece. Loved it.
I write lists...I'll have coffee with you I have done this...When I not reading magazines and thinking about leaving a guerilla poems ;D
I love this, and thought it hilarious, then realized I'd missed the last line. Only five lines and I missed the one that turns it on its head.An excellent write, all five lines of it.K
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