I'm glad you didn't so much as hint to what they replied.A little wondering is good
Interesting images and such a fine last line.
Blackbird say goodbye?????
I love this, love the spiders and birds. Good one, kiddo.
intriguing...your last line cinches these together nicely in a tight little verse...just poke some holes for the spiders...smiles.
Gods, but I adore your work.......:)
MZ doin' what MZ does best...short, original, edgy and beautiful.
Loved the ending....surely was a surprise!!
'blackbird fly/into the light of the dark black night...' yes, often they don't come back, but the ones that do should know.
I love it and as usual, I agree with Fireblossom!
oooh, Love it~ The intrigue of wonder, how striking ;D
This is wonderful - it has the feel of a sevenling, with the sense of mystery in the fragments of things mentioned and a wealth of emotion oozing between every line.
I love this. Huge grin on my face. :) Every word is my favorite.In the last line, I would wrap down "with you" to a second line for impact and rhythm.
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