Wednesday, October 3, 2012

One October Night

Jack
had a wife
and a butterfly knife.

John met both.

For Words Count at Real Toads

26 comments:

Helen said...

... bowing down!
The queen of brief ...

Kerry O'Connor said...

Haha!
Ah, the consequences of trespassing...not going to be pretty.

Brian Miller said...

john had it coming

Far Beyond The Ridge said...

I saw that on the news.
It happened at the intersection of
I do and i don't.
~rick

PattiKen said...

Oh, clever! I'm with Brian. He had it coming.

Kateri said...

A few words says it all.

Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger said...

I am still laughing--wonderful story and oh my--

unfetteredbs said...

smart!

aprille said...

You're getting a bit long-winded here :-)

Kay L. Davies said...

Eleven words! LOL
K

Mary said...

Ha...and that was the end of the story!

Heaven said...

Clever MZ ~ I can imagine the scene before and after ~

Ella said...

Clever, ...and whoa! I can imagine how that all went~

Fireblossom said...

Too wordy. I got bored and quit halfway through!

Peggy said...

Yes a very brief tale but it is all there for us to fill in!

hedgewitch said...

You are way too good at this, Missy.

manicddaily said...

Oops! k .

Hannah said...

What!!?? You're awesome. Seriously well done. The queen of potent brevity!! :)

my heart's love songs said...

my, oh my!

Robyn Greenhouse said...

so much said with so few words!

kaykuala said...

Brevity in classic fashion, MZ!

Hank

Fred Rutherford said...

This is great, an entire story told in 11 words. Very cool

Lolamouse said...

Ouch.

vivinfrance said...

What's a butterfly knife? :-)

flipside records said...

Brilliant!

Brian, is that a pun?

Rick.Daddario said...

aloha Mama Zen. a tongue full of word flow. way cool rhythm and rhyme - and a lot of yikes too. aloha.