Beautiful metaphor. Very well done.
I love this one!
Beautifully penned. I love the imagery used here.
Very good painting with words
Haiku precision in an enchanting mix of dance, seduction, engagement and adoration--all in the interaction of a woman and a tree and the wind--in the right season of course. I used to feel this playfulness as possession while walking my school books home after dark. OoOo . . .
One of the more pleasant spells to fall under, I think.
A haiku for Fireblossom's challenge! How daring...I love to read of Autumn in personification - that is a little bit of magic right there.
SO beautiful!!!!!! I can see her, swaying by with her skirts lifted.
Oh, very cool!
She must leave them all a-tremble ;)
Ha! This is great! I wrote a similar one for the prompt 'revelation.' Love "the trees shiver" Well done.
Naught more beautiful than dancing Autumn in with words.......;)
I love autumn, and your leave strip tease!
Another damn good haiku!
oo la la...she's got the magic...and knows how to use it obviously
Ah...a sweet spell to fall under.
Mmm, there is nothing like a seasonal change. I think your Haiku Suite speaks well of it. Lovely image this one creates for the reader.Thank you for stopping by my blog earlier.
This is a favorite! You captured a mystical view~ :D
This paints such a lovely picture,,,brings a sigh and a smile - so well done.
Haiku for FBF? Are you messin' with me, woman?These are sweet, though. I like them.
Your skilled way with words will never cease to amaze me. Bravo.K
Loved this! I visualized and enjoyed!
Dryad Marilyn! k.
Nice! Nice!I find haiku very difficult to write, but you make it feel natural and easy.
There's so much fun and anticipation in the Fall. Nicely MZHank
oh! this is my new favorite! ADORE this, MZ!!!♥
I am spellbound by the position of that skirt!Wilderness Waltz
ah !!thats adorable...i liked the line "spellbound at her feet"good one
I adore this prose. This is fine writing. Everything, the skirt, the breeze, the leaves, the feet. This is wonderful. (this word, wonderful, does not do this work justice)
Ohhhhhh. Is there anything more magic than Fall? I don't think so. This is fantastic.
Dear Happygirl. Please look up the word "prose."
Amazing! Love the magical quailty here.
MZ,You are a daring lady submitting haiku to FB for her challenge! I love your autumnal images in this set. Just beautiful!
soft incantations.. ahh
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