Sunday, September 30, 2012

If We Were Lovers

If we were lovers,
I would kiss you at red lights-
hard, thoroughly, and unhurriedly-
until cars backed and stacked
and curses blued the air
like vulgar, finely feathered

"Green means go
get a fucking room,
why dontcha?"

I'd lace my fingers with yours,
dangle my feet out the passenger window,
and let you drive me (mad)
to the next intersection.

If we were lovers,
I'd wear your old t-shirts
with heels and with diamonds
and without panties or plans to leave the house
on Saturday night

or Sunday morning.

If we were lovers,
I'd soak in you
like a hot bath

with vanilla lavender bubbles.

For Poetry Pantry


Tara R. said...

This makes me want to go on a long drive with my Mister.

Mary said...

Ah, this sounds like PURE BLISS!

Brian Miller said...

dang...might need to print this out and leave it laying know...

Fireblossom said...

Oh. my.

This is sexy like nobody's business.

I'm a little short of breath!

I'm liking the lavender. Nice touch, girl.

Sioux said...

This is steamin' hot.

Helen said...

Once, just once in a lifetime .. we all deserve this kind of mad, crazy love. Wowza ...

Cressida de Nova said...

Smiles..hard to top this..wonderful!

Mimi Foxmorton said...

Crazy....mad......beautiful! :)

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Sensuous plus!

Green Speck said...

Wow ... this was so passionately steamy :-)

Grandmother said...

Sexy, steamy, cool!

Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger said...

I loved, loved this! Sexy and fun--

Kerry O'Connor said...

Exactly so!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Wowzers! Smokin'!

Laura said...

sorry sister...he's MY lover... well you know, in between the kids and the laundry and all the other stuff that happens in middle age... but STILL he IS my lover.

LOVE this poem... oozes those vanilla lavender bubbles!

renf said...

this poem sucked me in,
made me want to live it,
and when it was over, i missed the time i spent in my imagination

my heart's love songs said...

damn, woman! this is HOT! especially love... well, i love all of it, but i do especially love ~

"I would kiss you at red lights-
hard, thoroughly, and unhurriedly-"

now THAT's the way to kiss!

happygirl said...

Sexy. SERIOUSLY, sexy.

Far Beyond The Ridge said...

I really like the freedom of this piece, mz. The high spirited playfulness as fuel for the "if"
And the cursing as vulgar birds was great.
(see~i told you i could behave)

Claudia said...'s getting hot in it...vanilla lavender bubbles...and... let you drive me (mad)
to the next intersection....heck...yes!!!

Far Beyond The Ridge said...

Oh! And this came close to happening to me once way back in high school. A girl was riding with me and getting really squirmy and had her hands between her legs. I stopped at a light, she bit her lower lip and smiled.
Then she opened the door, got out, squatted and pee'd. Right there on the street!
8 o'clock at night
She got back in and said, "sorry, i couldn't hold it any longer"

Your story, mz, is much hotter!

Anonymous said...

I'm not sure about the vanilla lavender, but the rest - the car - sounds pretty great! Very vivid! I love the honkers! k.

Anonymous said...

I'm not sure about the vanilla lavender, but the rest - the car - sounds pretty great! Very vivid! I love the honkers! k.

flipside records said...

Delicious. You make traffic lights sound quite pleasant.

I really like the sound of "thoroughly" and "unhurriedly" close together like that. Also "backed" and "stacked."

Love the feet out the window and "drive me (mad)." Of course, your sans-panties plans are a perfect lead-in to the ending, where we are left imagining Part 2 of this story.

That hanging "IF" is sure a killer with bare hands and long, sharp fingernails.

gautami tripathy said...

Loved your post!


Anonymous said...

very nice indeed.. hot