What a scintillating summer love poem, MZ!
Sometimes watermelon will quench your thirst like nothing else. This is wild and tender, both, and brings back the memories.Lovely imagery, perfectly balanced.
yeah, mz, i think it should be sticky and messy.reminds me of when woody allen was asked if sex was dirty-he replied, only if it's done right.delicious poemrick
sweet suck of flesh from the rind...ooo wee....this is hot....
Wow!! I'll never think of watermelon the same way! Delicious indeed!!
Fabulous. I think I'm craving melon :)
I can taste this one, MZ!
A slice of watermelon never sounded so good!
Just great. k.
Sweet suck of flesh from the rind" ... oh so lovely, luscious with possibility. I love how you write.
This poem makes me like watermelon even more. I didn't think that was possible.
Sweet watermelons ~ Luscious write ~
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