I like the miscreant midnight date ~
cradle me like a character flaw...haha...that is just wicked awesome MZ
I love miscreant and midnight together, and the secret hush of the pause before the last two lines.Excellent!Rick
I'm with Brian today!! Wicked and awesome indeed!!
This is just amazing... you are amazing. I love miscreant midnight and cradle me like a character flaw.
My lips are sealed.
Meet meCradle meBear witnessTell no oneSimple commands, brilliantly set in alliteration, meter, and distance from "grinding stonesand rot."
Very cool spoken aloud. Absolutely love cradle me lika character flaw- so neat. Thanks
Don't think I stole your "midnight." I got it from Kellie's midnight-swamp prompt. :)I love this:"Cradle melike a character flaw."That is one thing we can never really let go of, even if we say we're going to and absolutely mean it. Character flaws are with us for life, at least in our deepest places.
Awesomeness!!(Can you tell I love it?)
I too love "miscreant midnight" and"Cradle me like a character flaw," and the use of white space before the last two lines. Nine lines...twenty-five words. I am regularly amazed with what you do with so little...
Cradle me - indeed! anyway and all night. Thanks!
As always--you blow me away with how much you can do in a few lines. Miscreant midnight, indeed.
Bear witness to my weakness and tell nobody. This is nakedness. Wow.
I just love this! That miscreant midnight just screams trouble to follow!
Wow. "Cradle me like a character flaw" painted memories for me. Well done, once again.K
I LOVE "cradle me like a character flaw". Wowzers!
Zoweee...that is so good! So very very good!
...cradle me like a character flaw! love thatThe whole tone is just... bad ass! :)
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