Wednesday, July 4, 2012

Indecision

Yes.
Yes?
Yes.

A parody of my own brevity for Izy's challenge at Real Toads.  

19 comments:

Mary said...

Ha!

Isadora Gruye said...

well played, Mama....well played. You whittled it down to just pure sass!

Viva la

Fireblossom said...

This could be cut by a third!

Sylvia K said...

Hmmm, sounds just like me!

Susie Clevenger said...

Yes...love the style in this poem :)

PattiKen said...

Funny lady.

rosemary mint said...

Oh man, Shay's comment is hilarious.

I was going to suggest adding a line:

Yes!

J Cosmo Newbery said...

!

Kerry O'Connor said...

At least you always reply in the affirmative, even when uncertain.
:)

Brian Miller said...

ha. too funny MZ

hedgewitch said...

Ha! There's something sort of George Carlinish about this. I could think of another word, also...but its NSFW.

Fred Rutherford said...

lol

Lolamouse said...

Yes.

turtlememoir said...

love it, MZ - could be me, but i'd probably have to add a fourth line:
yes...?

manicddaily said...

Ha Ha! With no question marks. I personally think brevity is a strong point. K.

Mary Mansfield said...

Love this!!

Margaret said...

Love the punctuation. ha ha

I actually have tried to shorten my poems due to the fact I like your brevity... but... this may be pushing it a bit. :)

Ella said...

lol! Love it...

my heart's love songs said...

ROTFLMFAO!!!