well played, Mama....well played. You whittled it down to just pure sass!Viva la
This could be cut by a third!
Hmmm, sounds just like me!
Yes...love the style in this poem :)
Oh man, Shay's comment is hilarious.I was going to suggest adding a line:Yes!
At least you always reply in the affirmative, even when uncertain.:)
ha. too funny MZ
Ha! There's something sort of George Carlinish about this. I could think of another word, also...but its NSFW.
love it, MZ - could be me, but i'd probably have to add a fourth line:yes...?
Ha Ha! With no question marks. I personally think brevity is a strong point. K.
Love the punctuation. ha haI actually have tried to shorten my poems due to the fact I like your brevity... but... this may be pushing it a bit. :)
lol! Love it...
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