Sunday, July 1, 2012

Ellipses

In the pause
after the asking,
kiss ellipses .
                   .
                   .
down my neck,
and I'll say yes.

for Poetry Pantry

19 comments:

Fireblossom said...

Would anyone be fool enough not to, with an invitation like that?

Sweet and sexy, Kel.

awakenedwords said...

well...if you insist. ;-)

Mary said...

One word: HOT!

Sioux said...

In 15 words, smokin'. You and Shay are both on fire tonight.

(Not to mention that is my favorite form of punctuation...)

Kerry O'Connor said...

Sometimes it is that simple, because there is nothing you wouldn't do for the one who loves you.

Abin Chakraborty said...

superbly done!

Brian Miller said...

oo la la...nice

J Cosmo Newbery said...

How could I refuse?

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Delectable as ever!

TALON said...

Ahh - just gorgeous. Yes, it's the spaces between that hold the most.

Happy Fourth of July, Mama Zen!

Daydreamertoo said...

Oooo..how could you say no? :)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

What Mary said:)

PattiKen said...

Elipses are my favorite punctuation too. That which is left unsaid is so much more eloquent than that which is given voice, or

That which is left unsaid...

See what I mean?

hedgewitch said...

I agree with Talon--you get all the anticipation between the first ellipse and the last...extra good that way.

Fred Rutherford said...

This is very cool. The subtle projection of the ellipses from kiss to neck is really nicely done.

rosemary mint said...

Oh so clever. :)

For what it's worth, I "read" each ellipsis with a loud tongue click.

Gemma Wiseman said...

O how sweet and sensual enhanced by gorgeous alliteration!

Kiana said...

Short and sexy....lovely piece

Loredana Donovan said...

Thank you for visiting my blog and your kind comment. Love this ... sweet and sensual :)