Yep, that's why I love the darkness ...
I like your dark haiku ...
Now that is powerful in a small amount of words.
This looks suspiciously like haiku to me.
Love this haiku.
wow, great word choice here and love the dark action
Darkness heightened the feelings of being safe though some get frightened by it! True, MZ! Nice haiku!Hank
Awesome! You said so much in this haiku mama Zen. Thank you for sharing.Namaste
lots of alliteration as well...and nice grit to your imagery...
very contemplative haiku ~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)
Bril, and I don't know what haiku is, but I like whatever this is.
Lovely flow of alliteration makes this fun to read aloud.
Love all your B's and bruises and bright bliss.
Love the alliterations used.....and you made the dark feel so comforting and kind.....nice work
PERFECT piece to call a summer day done here in the Sonora Desert!http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2012/06/18/tucson-summer/
Few words, strong images, sharp writing.
Ah...love your work! This is very good.
Wow, I felt the weight of your words...powerful and so well done!
i love the bliss!a really stunning haiku, MZ!♥
Spray painted with deftness and skill. Dark and delicious.
Darkness deadfalls and bliss black limbs. LOVE it.
Oh wow, you are on a red-hot roll sister. Fantastic.
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