Monday, June 18, 2012

Skipping Twilight

Darkness deadfalls quick
and buries day's bruising bright
under bliss black limbs.

For Tackle It Tuesday and Open Link Monday at Real Toads

27 comments:

Sylvia K said...

Yep, that's why I love the darkness ...

Adura Ojo said...

Seductive darkness...

Helen said...

I like your dark haiku ...

Gail said...

Now that is powerful in a small amount of words.

Fireblossom said...

This looks suspiciously like haiku to me.

PattiKen said...

Love this haiku.

Unfettered BS said...

wow, great word choice here and love the dark action

kaykuala said...

Darkness heightened the feelings of being safe though some get frightened by it! True, MZ! Nice haiku!

Hank

Fred Rutherford said...

Awesome haiku.

Aidz Giannini said...

Tasty indeed

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Awesome! You said so much in this haiku mama Zen. Thank you for sharing.

Namaste

Brian Miller said...

lots of alliteration as well...and nice grit to your imagery...

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

very contemplative haiku ~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

Buddah Moskowitz said...

Bril, and I don't know what haiku is, but I like whatever this is.

Laurie Kolp said...

Lovely flow of alliteration makes this fun to read aloud.

Kerry O'Connor said...

Love all your B's and bruises and bright bliss.

joanne said...

Love the alliterations used.....and you made the dark feel so comforting and kind.....nice work

Kim Nelson said...

PERFECT piece to call a summer day done here in the Sonora Desert!

http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2012/06/18/tucson-summer/

hedgewitch said...

Few words, strong images, sharp writing.

Robert Geiss said...

wow !

Mystic_Mom said...

Ah...love your work! This is very good.

Ella said...

Wow, I felt the weight of your words...powerful and so well done!

my heart's love songs said...

i love the bliss!

a really stunning haiku, MZ!

Herotomost said...

Spray painted with deftness and skill. Dark and delicious.

ayala said...

Love this!

happygirl said...

Darkness deadfalls and bliss black limbs. LOVE it.

rosemary mint said...

Oh wow, you are on a red-hot roll sister. Fantastic.