Sunday, April 1, 2012

Too Eager

Under such a moon,
"too eager" barely passes
for eager enough.

For the April Heights Haiku Challenge

20 comments:

anthonynorth said...

It does indeed :-)

Richard Cody said...

I had to think about that one a moment.

Sylvia K said...

Oh, yes!!

zongrik said...

just enough

 four eager senryu

jen revved said...

Finally, a truly brilliant haiku~! Brava! xxxj

Fireblossom said...

Hello? Remember me? The librarian in Derry, Maine. That haiku thing we killed before? It's baaaack.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm okay. Really.

Mary said...

Love it!

Bruce Miller said...

Superb!

Fred Rutherford said...

You haiku so well. Great job once again. Thanks

Manicddaily said...

Ha--wonderful. K.

Grace said...

A nice twist...Great to see you in fine form ~

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Well, just change the moon, then!:)

Eager Wildflower

Gemma Wiseman said...

A neat package of powerful thoughts frolicking beneath an indifferent moon!

hedgewitch said...

Perfect package, totally shouts under the plain moon wrapper.

SweetTalkingGuy said...

WoW! you're so alert! This Screams 'under the moon of love' to me!!!

Dave King said...

The others have said it all. I had todo a double think - which I like very much. Splendid.

Anonymous said...

Oh wow. It's all about perspective, isn't it?

This week's words are up, Kelli. I hope you'll come write for me again:

http://rosemarymint.wordpress.com/2012/04/01/monday-melting-week-11/

Buddah Moskowitz said...

The usual excellence. You wanna swap talents and see what it's like to write lousy? - Mosk

Helen said...

Stellar (lunar too!)

Kendall said...

Very intriguing. Makes the mind wander. Thanks for sharing!