Thursday, April 12, 2012

On Kissing

A kiss that leaves you
coherent is not a kiss
that's worth the having.

For the April Heights Haiku Challenge

18 comments:

Fred Rutherford said...

Very nice, love this idea. What a fresh look. Thanks

Sylvia K said...

I love it! Of course, at my age, I'm not sure I even remember what it was like?????

Chevrefeuille said...

Lovely haiku. Nice and deep haiku. Very spiritual indeed.

Brian Miller said...

true that...i want my world all kinds of jacked up...

Fireblossom said...

I don't know what you mean. Please show me!

Ellecee said...

Love it. Sweet thought to which I agree :-)

ayala said...

True :)

Carol Steel 5050 said...

Lord, that's the truth! Beautiful!

Mary said...

Exactly!

beccagivens said...

Oh so true ... :) It should be memorable!!
Day 12 ~~ Coherent?

hedgewitch said...

Never trust a coherent kisser, I say.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

You want one of those wild kisses, right?


“Six Takes on ‘Coherent’”

“What Coherent Tales”

Katherine Krige said...

love it! And so true ;)

Kerry O'Connor said...

Oh, indeed and indeed.

Grace said...

Yes, so true..ha..ha...

Anonymous said...

Oh come on, we can't be incoherent all the time. ;)

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Gemma Wiseman said...

Creative idea that being coherent is not necessarily a desirable state in all circumstances! Lovely!

haikulovesongs said...

yes!