Perfect! There was a time when I could relate!!
Good one! Here, any storms are of my own making...LOL.
Leave it to you to rock a haiku.
This is an interesting side info, MZ! Yes,the pains of household chores are not adequately addressed by couples who bother only with their own thing. Did I get it right? Great thought!Hank
Wow. Brilliant! "The storm has comehome early from work." - especially because of all the possible interpretations. Keep it up!
hopefully it is a cooling stand in the rain and not a flood...
Wow, this is visceral and raw. Love it.
I'd be happy if the storm would slay the humidity, which seems bent on sucking up all the air for itself. Gasp.
Oh, excellent! I like the way the punctuation fractures the second line.
The skin of the day. I like that. I love your haiku style. :)rosemarymint.wordpress.com
I just wish it would take a day off.
Pretty neat Haiku MZ. Warmth bleeds from the skin, love that opening.
Good haiku Mama Zen :)
Beautiful haiku - like a painting in 17 strokes of the brush.
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